Sway

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• protist@retrofed.com ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  That end tho

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• Ghostie@lemmy.zip ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  “Small trees sway, waves break on inland waters” kind of hits.

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  • ilinamorato@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    Yeah, honestly, this is kind of a banger.

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• hesh@quokk.au ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  It also works backwards

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  • wonderingwanderer@sopuli.xyz ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    Make it a palindrome for full circularity

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• AnarchistArtificer@slrpnk.net ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  I really appreciate the OP of this (nontanne) for making me see the poetry in something I was familiar with, but had never considered in this way before. I think it actually works really well as a poem, and I feel like I’m going to remember this each time it’s extremely windy

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• SomeAmateur@sh.itjust.works ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  Same!

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• Deceptichum@quokk.au ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  This was oddly good.

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• TheRealLinga@sh.itjust.works ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  Read this to my wife, telling her it’sa poem. She likes the wordplay, and the metaphors. It made her feel uncertain, uneasy.

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  • Hadriscus@jlai.lu ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    Wait let me try the same

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• Test_Tickles@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  Also an accurate description of the 2 hours immediately following my consuming taco bell.

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  • ayyy@sh.itjust.works ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    You need more vegetables in your diet.

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• Morphit@feddit.uk ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  This sounds so much like Overseer’s - Heligoland: youtube.com/watch?v=4NmrluR4VkY

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• Evil_Shrubbery@thelemmy.club ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  This leaves rustled jimmies of violent destruction in my mind.

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