Replying to my own comment, I think the best tell that this is AI generated is the — character. There’s not even a key on the keyboard for that. Alt-0151 (on the keypad) is the only way I know how to get it.
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CromulantCrow@lemmy.zip 1 day ago
A thousand apologies for bringing Chat GPT into this assignment, but, well, I couldn’t help myself.
In this essay I will explore how the artificial divide between Arts and STEM disciplines has been perpetuated, the consequences of this separation, and the immense potential that lies in their collaboration. Using the example of Queen—a band whose members’ diverse academic backgrounds fueled their creative genius—I will argue that the intersection of artistic imagination and scientific rigor is not only possible, but essential for innovation and progress. Furthermore, I will examine the role that societal structures, particularly those influenced by business interests, have played in maintaining this divide, and how overcoming it could empower individuals and communities alike.
First, let us consider the origins of this divide. Historically, the “Two Cultures” debate, popularized by C.P. Snow in the mid-20th century, framed the arts and sciences as fundamentally incompatible. This narrative has been reinforced by educational systems that require students to choose between creative and analytical paths early in their academic careers. As a result, students often internalize the belief that they must be either “artistic” or “scientific,” rarely both. This false dichotomy not only limits personal growth but also stifles the kind of interdisciplinary thinking that leads to groundbreaking achievements.
Queen’s story challenges this narrative. Brian May’s background in astrophysics, Roger Taylor’s training in dentistry, Freddie Mercury’s art school experience, and John Deacon’s expertise in electronics all contributed to the band’s unique sound and stage presence. Their music is a testament to the power of combining technical skill with artistic vision—an approach that has resonated with millions and stood the test of time.
But why does this divide persist? Here, I return to the business major, a metaphor for the systems and structures that benefit from keeping Arts and STEM apart. In a world where creativity and technical knowledge are siloed, those who control the means of production and distribution—often with business backgrounds—can more easily exploit both groups. By fostering competition rather than collaboration, they ensure that neither side realizes its full potential, maintaining the status quo and their own position of power.
The consequences of this separation are profound. When artists and scientists work in isolation, society misses out on innovations that require both creative insight and technical expertise. From medical breakthroughs inspired by artistic anatomy studies to technological advances driven by aesthetic design, history is full of examples where collaboration has led to extraordinary results.
In conclusion, the supposed rift between Arts and STEM is not a natural divide, but a constructed barrier that serves the interests of a select few. By recognizing our shared potential and fostering interdisciplinary collaboration, we can unlock new possibilities and create a more vibrant, innovative, and equitable society. Just as Queen’s members combined their diverse talents to create music that transcends genres, so too can we bridge the gap between art and science to achieve greatness together.
CromulantCrow@lemmy.zip 1 day ago
lime@feddit.nu 1 day ago
i think macos inserts those automatically if you do three dashes.
carotte@lemmy.blahaj.zone 1 day ago
its also on phone keyboards, at least on iphone, you can hold the dash key and select the long dash: —
same for the ellipsis, which a lot of people cite as a proof something was written with AI, but iphones (and other phones too, probably) insert them automatically when you type 3 dots…
Semjaza@lemmynsfw.com 1 day ago
Libre (and ethnic cleansing of Palestine supporting Microsoft) Office does, too.
Doc_Crankenstein@slrpnk.net 1 day ago
There is a key for — on my phone. Just hold down the - key and it pops up as an option. I use it all the time.
DahGangalang@infosec.pub 1 day ago
There is a key for — on my phone. Just hold down the - key and it pops up as an option — I use it all the time.
FTFY
Doc_Crankenstein@slrpnk.net 1 day ago
Bro caught me slippin’
ToastedCoconuts@piefed.blahaj.zone 1 day ago
My organic chemistry professor spent a solid 30 minutes explaining the difference between an em dash and an en dash so we could use them correctly in our lab reports. Then ended his little lecture with saying "They're in the special character menu of your word processor. Unless you're on Mac, then I suggest googling them."
I don't think any of us used either dash, but I'm just sad no one called him on his BS lol
kibiz0r@midwest.social 1 day ago
On a Mac, you can do opt+hyphen or shift+opt+hyphen, for en dash or em dash respectively.
sp3ctr4l@lemmy.dbzer0.com 23 hours ago
The emdash is a dead giveaway, but its mostly the high school level writing style.
It is astonishingly uncreative and simplistic with sentence structure, it just directly regurgitates the points from its prompt it was specifically directed to address, there’s no clever or compelling phrasing or larger metaphor, there’s no personality ir expressiveness, willingness to say something maybe a bit edgy or controversial, very neutered and bland writing style… and there’s no consecutive introduction of, then expanding on nor synthesis of concepts, all the references are just mentioned, explained, addressed, discarded, onto the next one, like so many bullet points that need to be fluffed up to hit a word count.
Finally… did you intentionally prompt it to emulate the ‘in this essay i will…’ ‘self contained, non referential body paragraphs’ ‘in conclusion, here’s a few sentences that could have been the entire essay’ … did you intetionally tell it to mimic this extremely basic writing style?
Or did it just… do all of that on its own, like the mean average of five million highschool sophomore book reports?
CromulantCrow@lemmy.zip 22 hours ago
I literally just prompted it with “Please finish this essay” and then typed in what justqueenthoughts had posted. And yeah, I think it followed along in the style of the prompt reasonably well, but didn’t really add anything interesting. Which is no surprise, that’s what LLMs do. Point it in a direction and it will regurgitate an approximation of the mean in the training data that applies.
ThoGot@feddit.org 1 day ago
My laptop can do the — when I press AltGr and -
darklamer@lemmy.dbzer0.com 1 day ago
I think the best tell that this is AI generated is the — character. There’s not even a key on the keyboard for that.
Then you must have a really crappy keyboard.
Jankatarch@lemmy.world 1 day ago
Apology unaccepted. Have my dislike.
Klear@sh.itjust.works 1 day ago
This may have been a remotely funny comment if OP wasn’t downvoted to oblivion.
MBM@lemmings.world 1 day ago
Somehow it feels like this whole essay could be summarized in a single paragraph of, say, 3 proper sentences
sp3ctr4l@lemmy.dbzer0.com 23 hours ago
Yes, that is correct, this is the basic 5 paragraph small essay structure:
Intro paragraph - I am going to say blah blah.
Body paragraphs (ususlly 3, can be more) - each particular point of blah blah, explained in a self contained manner, that doesn’t reference or build upon anything other body paragraphs.
Conclusion paragraph - I said blah blah.
This is a writing style typically taught to middle schoolers, 20 years ago, before we spent 20 years passing every failing student onto the next grade becauase otherwise the school will shut down.
It is meant to be an introduction to the concept of writing in a longer form than just answering a single question with basically one paragraph.
It is not meant to be good, compelling, moving or engaging writing… it is meant to be the bridge between basic and intermediate levels of literacy.
Writing in this manner almost always can be boiled down to maybe a couple of sentences, basically you could just rewrite the conclusion with a bit more detail, and there ya go.
elevenbones@sh.itjust.works 1 day ago
Tl;dr
blindsight@beehaw.org 1 day ago
ngl, that’s a pretty good persuasive essay. Since the OP gave the prompt, it also took creative risks with an essay topic that is original, and doesn’t just parrot the consensus opinion on a well-trodden topic.
I’d give this a really good grade up to grade 11.
sp3ctr4l@lemmy.dbzer0.com 23 hours ago
Dear god I hope you aren’t a teacher, I was writing better than this in middle school.
nicknonya@lemmy.blahaj.zone 8 hours ago
apologies not accepted, the hounds have been released