Please critique this in terms of its raising awareness of the less aware. It's old news to us, but will it help people wake up a little?

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• Carl@anarchist.nexus ⁨23⁩ ⁨minutes⁩ ago

  This would be better as a series of posters. It’s too busy for one poster, and people won’t actually read anything. Create a punchy logo to put on all of the posters. This will help create consistency and grab attention. But then move the right column to a separate poster, and reduce the word count in general.

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• postman@literature.cafe ⁨1⁩ ⁨hour⁩ ago

  “The system wasn’t just discovered – it was built.”

  Pure Chatgpt waffle! Make everything more human sounding.

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  • jnod4@lemmy.ca ⁨3⁩ ⁨minutes⁩ ago

    Don’t worry, in a generation it’s gonna sound more natural

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• SorteKanin@feddit.dk ⁨59⁩ ⁨minutes⁩ ago

  This is like 1 poster that should be 7 different posters.

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• frongt@lemmy.zip ⁨1⁩ ⁨hour⁩ ago

  This is a whole presentation collapsed into one image. Ain’t no one reading all that

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• fireweed@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

  Just from a graphic design perspective, it’s way too busy. Too many slogans; pick one or at most two messages (e.g. one at top as into and one at bottom as outro). The text is way too small to read on mobile. When everything is highlighted text, nothing is highlighted text. The art style for the icons is not consistent. The rightmost column has to go; either put the info at the bottom of the image or delete.

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  • wowwoweowza@lemmy.world ⁨28⁩ ⁨minutes⁩ ago

    This is useful. Thank you.

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• 0ndead@infosec.pub ⁨1⁩ ⁨hour⁩ ago

  Don’t use AI to get your point across.

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• Tolookah@discuss.tchncs.de ⁨2⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

  On one hand it’s super informative, on the other, it’s super informative. Most people will see the walls of text and have their eyes glaze over. It’s good, but you almost want a second one that is punchy and to the point with a similar style.

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• False@lemmy.world ⁨1⁩ ⁨hour⁩ ago

  “you okay by the rules” comes off as super biased political non sense, so you lost me immediately.

  But I’m much more “appeal to the mind” than “appeal to the heart”

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• one_old_coder@piefed.social ⁨2⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

  Is it slop?

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  • dvoraqs@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

    Slop is material thrown together without care. Clearly we don’t see that here when the context looks pretty good already to me and the creator is asking for feedback to make it better.

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  • cally@piefed.blahaj.zone ⁨1⁩ ⁨hour⁩ ago

    Yeah, it has most of the signs of AI generated posters.

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• assaultpotato@sh.itjust.works ⁨2⁩ ⁨hours⁩ ago

  “If nobody is doing anything wrong, then why try to hide it?”

  Horrendous reasoning even if used for something I agree with

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  • wowwoweowza@lemmy.world ⁨28⁩ ⁨minutes⁩ ago

    I literally want to eat the rich but I’m not winning converts. Thought I’d go with something more pablum.

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• rirus@feddit.org ⁨1⁩ ⁨hour⁩ ago

  Highlight the negative impacts more and less how they do it and how normal people do it because the entire picture makes the normal people look stupid and enrage them into thinking That they also should avoid paying taxes and do it the rich man’s style and trying to look for loopholes.

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