Comment on Anon tries to keep his hands busy

frightful_hobgoblin@lemmy.ml ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

• fibojoly@sh.itjust.works ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  Well yeah, it’s a slice of life, not the Hero’s Journey.

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  • MadBob@feddit.nl ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    This motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn’t revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue…

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  • manuallybreathing@lemmy.ml ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    Its totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU

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    • steal_your_face@lemmy.ml ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

      Long John silvers gold?

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  • Kusimulkku@lemm.ee ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

    Could’ve made it more interesting though

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    • LemmyKnowsBest@lemmy.world ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

      Yeah could’ve added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.

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      • Kusimulkku@lemm.ee ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

        Idk about adding, I would’ve just changed what is already there to be more interesting

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• Instigate@aussie.zone ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  One of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.

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• festnt@sh.itjust.works ⁨5⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  yeah, stories dont walk, duh

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