Comment on Anon tries to keep his hands busy

• MadBob@feddit.nl ⁨2⁩ ⁨years⁩ ago

  This motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn’t revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue…

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• manuallybreathing@lemmy.ml ⁨2⁩ ⁨years⁩ ago

  Its totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU

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  • steal_your_face@lemmy.ml ⁨2⁩ ⁨years⁩ ago

    Long John silvers gold?

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• Kusimulkku@lemm.ee ⁨2⁩ ⁨years⁩ ago

  Could’ve made it more interesting though

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  • LemmyKnowsBest@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨years⁩ ago

    Yeah could’ve added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.

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    • Kusimulkku@lemm.ee ⁨2⁩ ⁨years⁩ ago

      Idk about adding, I would’ve just changed what is already there to be more interesting

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