Shit yeah go for it, I love those kinds of stories!
Comment on Lmao
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 4 hours agoI wrote and tried publishing a short story about a species like that.
where only occasionally people on top of mountains see stars, and they chuck it as a consequence of low pressure. eventually they invented flight, and assume pilots going high enough to see stars are having cognitive issues due to lack of air.
They asked pilots to draw the stars they see, and they get different drawings (they sent pilots at different times of the year because they couldn’t ever expect stars to shift) and assume its proof that thise stars are a cognitive artifact.
Eventually a pilot swears they are real and can actually use then to navigate, skepticism, he proves it. brand new research field emerges.
Although the story focuses more on deep DEEP time an omniengineering. (A term I just made up because mega engineering is a concept way too small compared to the one in the story).
If you want I don’t mind putting that story in the conversation.
sp3ctr4l@lemmy.dbzer0.com 3 hours ago
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 3 hours ago
docs.google.com/document/d/…/edit?usp=drivesdk
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anothercatgirl@lemmy.blahaj.zone 58 minutes ago
thank u, good read
JoeBigelow@lemmy.ca 4 hours ago
I’d read it
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 3 hours ago
docs.google.com/document/d/…/edit?usp=drivesdk
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clay_pidgin@sh.itjust.works 3 hours ago
Heck yeah, I’d read that.
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 3 hours ago
docs.google.com/document/d/…/edit?usp=drivesdk
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clay_pidgin@sh.itjust.works 3 hours ago
Thanks! Will review.
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 3 hours ago
no pressure. and be honest, if some parts are shite tell me. and especially if it is all shite.
DanVctr@sh.itjust.works 3 hours ago
Post it for sure
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 3 hours ago
docs.google.com/document/d/…/edit?usp=drivesdk
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vala@lemmy.dbzer0.com 27 minutes ago
I liked it. It seems to fall apart at the end a bit but this is a really cool concept for sure.
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 19 minutes ago
if you don’t mind. could you elaborate? it’s ok if you don’t, I am rudely asking for free labor.
KurtVonnegut@mander.xyz 1 hour ago
I loved it. Thanks for sharing!
IAmNorRealTakeYourMeds@lemmy.world 1 hour ago
Given who you are, it means a lot.
Mandarbmax@lemmy.world 2 hours ago
That was a good read! I liked the pacing, the dawning not quite horror.