“He closed his eyes and his heart beat one last time. Carla cried in despair as all of his hair fell out, a final sign he would never wake up again.”
dying
Submitted 18 hours ago by restingOface@quokk.au to [deleted]
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SoupBrick@pawb.social 17 hours ago
HeyThisIsntTheYMCA@lemmy.world 7 hours ago
“then he farted that one fart we all try not to talk about to preserve the dignity of the departed. Real high and squeaky. You know the one.”
nieceandtows@programming.dev 9 hours ago
So I’m already half dead…
kurwa@lemmy.world 13 hours ago
You know if someones hair all fell out I would assume so
PattyMcB@lemmy.world 10 hours ago
saltesc@lemmy.world 16 hours ago
When an infonercial says, “But wait! There’s more!”
That’s usually the calibre of writing, but enough people get their credit cards out.
Sibshops@feddit.cl 17 hours ago
I just came across this. Amos from The Red Pyramid. Carter sees him trapped by the big bad Set only to change the scene.
DagwoodIII@piefed.social 16 hours ago
[off topic]
https://bookshop.org/p/books/body-trauma-a-writer-s-guide-to-wounds-and-injuries-david-w-page-md/5d7eda2851514c8e
David Page, ‘Body Trauma’
Describes how people react to various injuries. Invaluable for anyone creating a game or writing a story.