“He closed his eyes and his heart beat one last time. Carla cried in despair as all of his hair fell out, a final sign he would never wake up again.”
dying
Submitted 1 month ago by restingOface@quokk.au to [deleted]
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SoupBrick@pawb.social 1 month ago
HeyThisIsntTheYMCA@lemmy.world 1 month ago
“then he farted that one fart we all try not to talk about to preserve the dignity of the departed. Real high and squeaky. You know the one.”
nieceandtows@programming.dev 1 month ago
So I’m already half dead…
kurwa@lemmy.world 1 month ago
You know if someones hair all fell out I would assume so
saltesc@lemmy.world 1 month ago
When an infonercial says, “But wait! There’s more!”
That’s usually the calibre of writing, but enough people get their credit cards out.
Sibshops@feddit.cl 1 month ago
I just came across this. Amos from The Red Pyramid. Carter sees him trapped by the big bad Set only to change the scene.
PattyMcB@lemmy.world 1 month ago
DagwoodIII@piefed.social 1 month ago
[off topic]
https://bookshop.org/p/books/body-trauma-a-writer-s-guide-to-wounds-and-injuries-david-w-page-md/5d7eda2851514c8e
David Page, ‘Body Trauma’
Describes how people react to various injuries. Invaluable for anyone creating a game or writing a story.