Comment on He makes his plans for revenge

• solarvector@lemmy.dbzer0.com ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  Just requires one more comma after “destroy”

  Although I guess while I’m being pedantic they should be ellipses.

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• CuddlyCassowary@lemmy.world ⁨2⁩ ⁨months⁩ ago

  Oooh yeah, that works too! I just couldn’t get « …on this, the day of my daughter’s wedding… » out of my head.

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