Comment on He makes his plans for revenge

• BenLeMan@lemmy.world ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

  Classic Christopher Wolken cadence.

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  • solarvector@lemmy.dbzer0.com ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

    Just requires one more comma after “destroy”

    Although I guess while I’m being pedantic they should be ellipses.

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  • CuddlyCassowary@lemmy.world ⁨5⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

    Oooh yeah, that works too! I just couldn’t get « …on this, the day of my daughter’s wedding… » out of my head.

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