Comment on He makes his plans for revenge

solarvector@lemmy.dbzer0.com ⁨4⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

• CuddlyCassowary@lemmy.world ⁨4⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

  The commas just add a Godfather cadence, which seems, accurate.

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  • BenLeMan@lemmy.world ⁨4⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

    Classic Christopher Wolken cadence.

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    • solarvector@lemmy.dbzer0.com ⁨4⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

      Just requires one more comma after “destroy”

      Although I guess while I’m being pedantic they should be ellipses.

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    • CuddlyCassowary@lemmy.world ⁨4⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

      Oooh yeah, that works too! I just couldn’t get « …on this, the day of my daughter’s wedding… » out of my head.

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