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• Apytele@sh.itjust.works ⁨5⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

  If you’re curious but I haven’t got to the porn yet and the first third or so is… somewhat violent (idk it seems like a normal amount of violence to me but other people tell me that’s just because my childhood was fucked up and 0 violence is the normal amount of violence for most people…) Anyway they’ll probably feel each other up at some point in the next few chapters but they probably won’t fuck for like 10-20 more it’s a pretty slow burn antagonism to partnership dealio

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  • Daxter101@lemmy.blahaj.zone ⁨5⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

    I almost unintentionally just went through some 5 or 6 chapters. Holy shit it’s cool. Following all the theys and its and perspective changes is hard, but the story delivers the emotional tension and beats so fucking well.

    Good fucking job, I’m probably reading the rest of it over the next days, keep being awesome!

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    • Apytele@sh.itjust.works ⁨4⁩ ⁨days⁩ ago

      Oh, yeah I’ve spent 15ish years trying to make my teenage tentacle porn fic make sense. I have the entire ending mapped out and a few random scenes drafted if you want more after you’re done.

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