Comment on Almost made it
dangrousperson@feddit.org 4 days agoTranslation: Even if your bowels are ripping, never go break shitting.
I tried to keep the rhyme, even if the English translation isn’t grammaticaly correct.
Comment on Almost made it
dangrousperson@feddit.org 4 days agoTranslation: Even if your bowels are ripping, never go break shitting.
I tried to keep the rhyme, even if the English translation isn’t grammaticaly correct.
itslilith@lemmy.blahaj.zone 4 days ago
Maybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”?
It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional