Comment on It used to be a library
sundray@lemmus.org 2 days ago
I Walk the corner to the rubble,
That used to be a library, line up to the mind cemetery now,
Comment on It used to be a library
sundray@lemmus.org 2 days ago
I Walk the corner to the rubble,
That used to be a library, line up to the mind cemetery now,
RememberTheApollo_@lemmy.world 2 days ago
Ugh. I get it, but I dislike poetry that avoids grammar to make something seem deeper than it is.
I walk to the corner
To the rubble
That used to be a library.
Line up
To the mind cemetary now.
Valorie12@lemmy.world 1 day ago
Right but that doesn’t really fit with the song