The “you” vs “them” column makes me think of the adage “if you can’t explain it simply, you don’t understand it well enough.”

The “them” side feels specific to be consumable by someone who knows nothing, while not having enough content to teach someone who does understand the basics.

If you can simplify those columns even more, I think they could still be useful. The point is that rich people pay for people and systems that are able to make their money untraceable, but “you” can’t do that. So you pay taxes, they don’t. I like the column-based visual for this concept, I just don’t think the content is ‘there’ yet.