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snf@lemmy.world ⁨1⁩ ⁨week⁩ ago

It doesn’t scan. But it’s not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there’s one too many syllables in the second verse. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHA

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AngryCommieKender@lemmy.world ⁨1⁩ ⁨week⁩ ago
Second line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn’t for another couple lines.

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- snf@lemmy.world ⁨1⁩ ⁨week⁩ ago
  I was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction
  
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Zwiebel@feddit.org ⁨1⁩ ⁨week⁩ ago
You can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like “t’fast”

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- snf@lemmy.world ⁨1⁩ ⁨week⁩ ago
  Yeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like “guess I stood up too fast again”
  
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