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Zozano@aussie.zone ⁨1⁩ ⁨week⁩ ago

IMO, the second sentence feels like it’s cut off because I’m expecting an adjective at least, like:

He gazed toward the elementary school with a glint in his eye.

Or,

He gazed towards the elementary school and muttered ‘I wouldn’t hurt them’, as his nose began to grow.

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