Comment on Anon finds a hut
Diddlydee@feddit.uk 1 week ago
I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
Comment on Anon finds a hut
Diddlydee@feddit.uk 1 week ago
I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.
mortemtyrannis@lemmy.ml 1 week ago
Also the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.