The punctuation is so loud

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• Marty_TF@lemmy.zip ⁨2⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

  actually, could work as a somewhat poetic sentence if you change the punctuation a bit

  this, our home, is our life, us. our story.

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• pipariturbiini@sopuli.xyz ⁨2⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

  this community is basically rDontDeadOpenInside at this point

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  • SweetCitrusBuzz@beehaw.org ⁨2⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

    Not sure this particular one would even apply to Don’t Dead Open Inside. It barely meets the mark.

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• Kolanaki@yiffit.net ⁨2⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

  THIS our home**,** IS our life**,** US**.** our story**,**

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  • faintwhenfree@lemmus.org ⁨2⁩ ⁨weeks⁩ ago

    Nice poem.

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