Comment on Shrimps
Tier1BuildABear@lemmy.world 5 months agoThen the curtains should have changed color on the last panel if that thought ever even took a poo in the author’s head
Comment on Shrimps
Tier1BuildABear@lemmy.world 5 months agoThen the curtains should have changed color on the last panel if that thought ever even took a poo in the author’s head
spicytuna62@lemmy.world 5 months ago
Exactly. Show, don’t tell. The author also broke that rule in Panel 5 with “sex change occurs” written off to the side. We see the 𝓶𝓪𝓰𝓲𝓬 𝓫𝓾𝓫𝓫𝓵𝓮. Clearly, that means the sex change occurred in the context of the setup. We get it, dude.