Comment on Hunter Valley wedding crash survivors call for change three years after ‘bus trip from hell’
CameronDev@programming.dev 3 days ago
That article is terribly written. Get to the fucking point, what do you want changed, what failed. I shouldnt have to read a dozen bus crash anecdotes before you get to the things you want fixed.
zero_gravitas@aussie.zone 3 days ago
It’s an article version of the Australian Story episode, so that’s why it’s not ‘pyramid’ structure. Their ‘feature’ style articles don’t have a summary box at the top because they’re not pure information-delivery.