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teawrecks@sopuli.xyz â¨3⊠â¨days⊠ago
Quick feedback on the experience of casually browsing to your steam page: the trailer that autoplays spends the first ~20s being mostly just black. First person view of running and then hiding in a closet, then black, then a very dimly lit room, with cuts to what looks like the player inspecting a doll. I canât have sound on right now, so I donât know if there is interesting audio happening.
I highly recommend those first few seconds of the autoplay trailer showing something more compelling. IMO the best case outcome for someone in my shoes is, I see something in those first few seconds that makes me go âoooo, hell yeah, that looks interestingâ and I click Add to Wishlist. Instead my first thought was âthereâs no way this has just been black for 20sâ and checked my brightness settings to see if I was missing something.
FirsTimeDev@lemmy.world â¨3⊠â¨days⊠ago
Hi thank you for checking it out and thank you for the feedback!
I am working on a new trailer at the moment, Although I must say, I think you might have a bug, there are no more than 3 consecutive seconds where itâs all just black, it may show things differently on some devices.
Either way this trailer is temporary, Iâm not that good at marking / trailers and stuff, and I know it is very important.
Will try to put up a more impressive trailer soon , thanks again đđ˝